{"id":422,"date":"2008-12-04T13:00:00","date_gmt":"2008-12-04T17:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/2008\/12\/04\/wednesday-night-proofread\/"},"modified":"2008-12-04T13:00:00","modified_gmt":"2008-12-04T17:00:00","slug":"wednesday-night-proofread","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/2008\/12\/04\/wednesday-night-proofread\/","title":{"rendered":"Wednesday night &#8211; Proofread"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><div id=\"pBlogBody_453848006\" class=\"blogContent\">\n<center><\/p>\n<div align=\"left\">We just finished a great dinner with friend Elizabeth and her kids Burke and Izzy.. It was fun having them over&#8230;. <\/p>\n<p>As you probably know, I&#8217;ve been working on a paper about getting kids more interested in engineering and science.&nbsp; It&#8217;s a topic that&#8217;s near and dear to me..so I enjoy the material..&nbsp; but a paper is a paper and I just hate writing..&nbsp; we&#8217;ll.. it&#8217;s not that I hate it so much.. it&#8217;s that it&#8217;s difficult for me. As you may have noticed.. spelling and grammar are not my strengths. Anyway,&nbsp; I finished the first draft about a month ago.. now the final draft is due Friday. I&#8217;ve gotten feedback from about 10 folks . I stayed up most of Monday night worked all&nbsp; those comments back in.. It&#8217;s fun but hard to try and make sense of people&#8217;s comments.&nbsp;&nbsp; <\/p>\n<div align=\"center\">Taken at 3AM<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div align=\"left\"><\/div>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/i147.photobucket.com\/albums\/r319\/johncohn\/dec0308\/dec0308001.jpg\" \/><\/p>\n<p><\/p>\n<div align=\"left\">Yesterday I gave the &#8216;finished&#8217; copy to good friend Kathy who works as a professional proof reader and editor.&nbsp; TonightI went up to Kathy&#8217;s and she walked me through all the punctuation and wording bugs that were left.. and there were a TON of them..My 19 pages now all look like this<\/div>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/i147.photobucket.com\/albums\/r319\/johncohn\/dec0308\/dec0308035.jpg\" \/><\/p>\n<div align=\"left\">And this &#8230;. <\/div>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/i147.photobucket.com\/albums\/r319\/johncohn\/dec0308\/dec0308036.jpg\" \/><\/p>\n<div align=\"left\">And this &#8230;.<\/div>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/i147.photobucket.com\/albums\/r319\/johncohn\/dec0308\/dec0308038.jpg\" \/><\/p>\n<p><\/p>\n<div align=\"left\">It&#8217;s abotu 11 PM now.. and I&#8217;m just sitting down to work in all those corrections.. It&#8217;s goign to be a long and boring night.. I&#8217;d best get to it.. <\/div>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/i147.photobucket.com\/albums\/r319\/johncohn\/dec0308\/dec0308048.jpg\" \/><\/p>\n<div align=\"left\">Lou and Kathy have a picture of the bicentenial photo the town took at the round church.. I always stare at it as I go in their house&#8230; 1994.. wow&#8230;<\/div>\n<div align=\"left\"><\/div>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/i147.photobucket.com\/albums\/r319\/johncohn\/dec0308\/dec0308006.jpg\" \/><\/p>\n<div align=\"left\">And here we are.. Diane with Sam and me with Gabe&#8230; frozen in that moment.. surrounded by freinds.. <br \/>It makes me happy to see&#8230; <\/div>\n<p>\n<img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/i147.photobucket.com\/albums\/r319\/johncohn\/dec0308\/dec0308002.jpg\" \/><\/p>\n<div align=\"left\">Remember that, Sam ? Nite<br \/>-me<\/div>\n<p><\/center>\n<\/div><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>We just finished a great dinner with friend Elizabeth and her kids Burke and Izzy.. It was fun having them over&#8230;. As you probably know, I&#8217;ve been working on a paper about getting kids more interested in engineering and science.&nbsp; It&#8217;s a topic that&#8217;s near and dear to me..so I enjoy the material..&nbsp; but a &hellip; <a href=\"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/2008\/12\/04\/wednesday-night-proofread\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Wednesday night &#8211; Proofread<\/span> <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-422","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/422","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=422"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/422\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=422"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=422"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/johncohn.org\/base\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=422"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}